Give me a chance to live, a chance to nurture and grow,
just like the little seedling that in your garden you sow.
Give me the chance to live in the comforts of mother's womb
just like you would like the comforts of your home.
Give me a chance to see the world
A chance to get my share of parental love and affection,
A chance to be a child, a chance to live my childhood.
A chance to learn, a chance to play.
A chance to nurture the world like you they say
Give me an opportunity to emerge
from the cocoon of a little girl to a young lady.
Don't kill me mother I pray to you
I am no less efficient than your son
Don't despise me because i am a girl,
As your strength tomorrow i will whirl
Give me a chance to blossom and feel,
Give me a chance to be "ME"
- Nimisha
In this poetry a female foetus requests her mother to give her a chance to live
just like the little seedling that in your garden you sow.
Give me the chance to live in the comforts of mother's womb
just like you would like the comforts of your home.
Give me a chance to see the world
A chance to get my share of parental love and affection,
A chance to be a child, a chance to live my childhood.
A chance to learn, a chance to play.
A chance to nurture the world like you they say
Give me an opportunity to emerge
from the cocoon of a little girl to a young lady.
Don't kill me mother I pray to you
I am no less efficient than your son
Don't despise me because i am a girl,
As your strength tomorrow i will whirl
Give me a chance to blossom and feel,
Give me a chance to be "ME"
- Nimisha
16 comments:
thats a very nice poem .cause it didnt deal with a pair of lovers running around trees............but it addressed a problem that every indian should address to and do something about it..........REMEMBER ONLY A WOMAN CAN GIVE BIRTH.........!!!! PLZ STOP FEMALE FOETICIDE...
from where did u copy this.. Ha. :-) kidding its very nice.
from where did u copy this.. Ha. :-) kidding its very nice.
Nice message
hey go on dear,it was really a nice poem....i wud be following u in future.....happy blogging....!
unusual blog and a good one
wow... that was really an awesome one. I'm flattered.
So hidden talents getting revealed from both the sides :)
Keep up the good work going dear.
hmmm.. not bad.. not bad at all. Never thought a girl whom i used to tease would just surprise me... good job nimo... keep writing
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hmmm.. not bad.. not bad at all. Never thought a girl whom i used to tease would just surprise me... good job nimo... keep writing
Superb shonaa
Naari mukti sanghatan will like this one..
Might wanna approach them for they might want to make this their tag line.
its very sensitive nimisha... esp where u say 'dont kill me... i pray to u....'
nice one, u should write more...
awesome is the only word for this creation keep the spirit high Nimisha
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Laadi
very nice concept this.and the way u brought it out was very gud.Liked it lot.will read others also by tomorrow
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